CRAFT CRITIQUE

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Add the perfect touches to make your manuscript shine.

Concerned about relying too heavily on crutch phrases, action tags, or how to give your words that perfect flow? Sign up for a craft critique to learn what’s working, what’s not, and how to fix it. Services are available for all fiction and nonfiction manuscripts except the following:

  • Horror
  • Erotica
  • Poetry
  • Political Works

Please note:

  • Christian projects are welcome, but I’m not the best fit for other religious or philosophical works.
  • Please contact before submitting manuscripts with heavy language, gore, or open-door sex.
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SERVICE

Craft Critique

What’s Included
  • Detailed Critique Report
  • In-Line Feedback on Strengths and Mistakes
  • Additional Resources & Tips
Evaluating For
  • Sentence Structure
  • Purple Prose
  • Dialogue / Action Tags
  • Pacing
  • Voice
  • Tone
  • Setting/ Character Description
  • Crutch Words/Phrases
  • Common Mistakes
  • Common Inconsistencies

We will also discuss if you have any other areas of concern.

How it Works
  1. Choose your package needs below and confirm availability.
  2. Follow prompts to specify your project details and submit materials.
  3. Pay deposit.
  4. Critique previews will be delivered by deadline with invoice for final payment.
  5. Submit final payment.
  6. Receive complete critique.
  • Check the FAQ for commonly asked questions.
  • 1-2 free follow-up consultations available by email.

Pricing

Opening Pages

$15.00

In-Line Comments (Up to 5k Words)

Detailed Critique Report

Additional Resources & Tips

Partial

$45.00

In-Line Comments (Up to 50k Words)

Detailed Critique Report

Additional Resources & Tips

Full

$75.00

In-Line Comments (Up to 100k Words)

Detailed Critique Report

Additional Resources & Tips

Questions?

Check out the Better Writing in 5 FAQ Below: