THE WORKS
The Works.
If you’re looking to improve your overall manuscript, characters, plot, and craft, we can help you improve in as little as one session. Query package review included. Let’s get you published ASAP, at a fraction of the cost! Services are available for all fiction manuscripts except the following:
- Horror
- Erotica
- Poetry
Please note:
- Please contact before submitting manuscripts with heavy language, gore, or open-door sex.
- Christian projects are welcome, but I’m not the best fit for other religious or philosophical works.
SERVICE
The Works
What’s Included
- Detailed Reader Report
- In-Line Feedback
- Full Query Package Critique
- Full Plot Critique
- Full Character Dev. Critique
- Full Craft Critique
- Resources & Tips
- 2-3 Follow-Ups
Evaluating For
- Query Package / Pitch
- Plot / Story Structure
- Character Development
- Pacing
- Craft
- Voice
- Tone
- Setting
We will also discuss if you have any other areas of concern.
How it Works
- Choose your package needs below and confirm availability.
- Follow prompts to specify your project details and submit materials.
- Pay deposit.
- Critique previews will be delivered by deadline with invoice for final payment.
- Submit final payment.
- Receive complete critique.
- Check the FAQ for commonly asked questions.
- 2-3 free follow-up consultations available by email.
Pricing
The Works
$100.00
✓ Detailed Reader Report
✓ In-Line Feedback
✓ Full Plot Critique
✓ Full Character Development Critique
✓ Full Craft Critique
✓ Resources & Tips
✓ 2-3 Follow-Ups
The Works + Query Package
$120.00
✓ Detailed Reader Report
✓ In-Line Feedback
✓ Full Plot Critique
✓ Full Character Development Critique
✓ Full Craft Critique
✓ Resources & Tips
✓ 2-3 Follow-Ups
✓ Full Query Package Critique
✓ Logline Critique
✓ 3-4 Sentence Pitch Critique
Questions?
Check out the Better Writing in 5 FAQ Below: